At the time of great sorrow, I am really sorry to hear that about 400 people was killed during the flood. However, I am happy to know that some people are using/showing their great ideas to help
other people that has been affected by the flood, for them to ease this great burden such as making life-jackets made from empty plastic bottles and improvising flotation devices made from styrofoam blocks to float cars to safety which is pretty smart thing to do and other people are using Internet to know more what to make or what to do during floods. This examples are really helpful, for the people that got affcted by the flood since this can prevent some people that do not know to swim to float and it can also prevent some of their cars to wreck.
I myself also found a great idea or examples to add, and that is to build a plastic boat made from recylcling platics or trownaway plastics (not waterbottles) because if people use boats made from woods it cam reduce the amount of woods in Thailand and as many of us know, trees help flood to lessen by absorbing the water, so why not build a plastic boat?
Hi San, those innovations that are practical, economical and helpful to many others are also some of my favorites. In this post you include explanations to support your opinions, which is a sign of effective writing. Keep it up! On thing your writing would benefit from is punctuation. Go back and review some of the work we did with sentences and try to change some of the run-ons with commas or by breaking the sentences into shorter ones. It will make for an even better post!
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